[Poetry]Poem

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DarkMage
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[Poetry]Poem

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warm
soft
tender
joy
caresse of my lips
of my tongue
pleasure
holding her close
our bodies become one
passion
and joy of souls
merge into one
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I can see it like a whirlpool melting into the ending...err..sorry, not sure what else to say.
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Digi that's more then enough to say...thank you :)
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