[Poetry] Reed Rothchild

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[Poetry] Reed Rothchild

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I love you, you love me.
Going down the sugar tree.
We'll go down the sugar tree, and see lots of bees: playing, playing.
But the bees won't sting, because you love me.

I rule!
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For some reason, that looked like a chorus part for a song. Interesting mental imagery evoked from that poem.
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I liked the "I rule!" line.
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I liked it. It made me smile. :)
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Shoot me in the face.
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*BANG!* :roll
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